Hey there.... i have not written poems for a long time even though i read plenty of dem in sch... i came up with this over a few days la..i dun tink it is really a poem la...seems too organised to me...but nvm read it for yourselves and comment if you want la...all constructive critisism is welcome...so here goes...
Thinking about you
Puts a smile on my face.
Thinking about you
Brings me to a heavenly place.
Thinking about you
Gives me bright new hope.
Thinking about you
Helps me to cope.
When i wake up in the morning
I am thinking about you.
During the day
I am thinking about you.
Before i go to sleep
I am thinking about you.
In my dreams
I am thinking about you.
All the time
I am thinking about you.
hmm now that i hav typed it out...it sounds even crappier to me...haha...heck la...see wad ppl say...haha...ok dats all...bb
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